This is a little more difficult because some of the negative words are product words. . . .

Buy Parvaid, Vibactra Plus & Life Cell Support For Safe, Cost-Effective Home Parvo Treatment – Score: 55

Negative Words . . .
parvaid,: -40
plus: -64
life: -14
safe,: -2
treatment: -23

After a couple of iterations, I get to this…

Buy Parvaid, Vibactra Plus & Life Cell Support For Safe, Cost-Effective Home Parvo Medication – Score: 139

Here are a couple of others I came up with . . .

Buy Home Parvo Medication! Act Today! Save hundreds of dollars! – Score: 236

Buy Home Parvo Medication that can save lives and hundreds of dollars! – Score: 237

Good Luck!

I’m glad you’re enjoying these comments.

I always enjoy and find interesting, the different approaches that people take when marketing their products.

Ken

I’m always open to trying new tools to help get better conversion results. I ran both through the EMV tool with similar results.

Interesting. What have you been finding for a conversion rate correlation when using that tool?

I know your software uses different parameters to evaluate headline. It is on my future purchases list. Thanks again.

The headline is long, so I’ll take it in two pieces.

Now You Can Finally Learn How to Double or Even Triple Your Reading Speed Easily, While Improving Your Comprehension… – Score: 0

Negative words are:
now: -70
you: -6
learn: -14
how: -14
to: -11
double: -34
even: -41
your: -27
easily,: -8
while: -10
your: -27

To this . . .

You Can Finally Learn How to Multiply Reading Speeds Quickly, at the Same Time Improving Comprehension… – Score: 203

Second half . . . .

…Unleash Yourself From Habits That Make You Read At a Reluctant Crawl” – Score: 21

Negative words….

…unleash: -9
yourself: -38
you: -6
at: -11

…Break Existing Habits That Make You Read At a Forced Crawl” – Score: 173

Hopefully this will work better for you.

Your request . . .

Discover how to generate cash from home without selling or buying anything… – Score: 143

This isn’t too bad as is. I would have a link right there to where you want people to go if they want to go immediately.

Here’s what I would up with after a few minutes. . .

Discover how to construct a positive cashflow from home instead of selling or buying merchandise… – Score: 430

Good Luck!

Hey, I’m blind, so I’m afraid I can’t comment on Hypnosis Therapy, For people who are almost (but not quite) satisfied with their lives and can’t figure out how to get more of what they want: – - Score: 103

Better, but still room for improvement.

My last pass was:

Personal Hypnosis Consulting! For people that are nearly satisfied but would like more ! – Score: 237

This reads a little better and scores slightly lower:

Personal Hypnosis Consulting, For people that are nearly satisfied but would like to realize more ! – Score: 235

I have to admit I’m not totally satisfied with it yet. If there are other Glyphius users out there that would like to give it a try, let me know.